Downhill edit triscombe

Wankleburr
Wankleburr Posts: 19
edited August 2013 in Your pics and vids
heres and edit i knocked together a while ago wanted some feed back any tips from other film makers

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bK9cnY_gUGo

cheers
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  • The Real Radioactiveman
    The Real Radioactiveman Posts: 128
    not a film maker so ignore as appropriate ( I have watched a few though)

    Music- made me want to go to sleep

    camera mounting- the one where it is on the bars looking down at the forks/front wheel made me feel sick and couldnt see any of the trail.

    generally very limited views of the trail and rider at the same time , did you have a chest harness?

    - rear facing camera, that looked good and was more interesting as you could see a good view of the trail and rider

    length of video- seemed to be lots of duplication of the same trail sections?

    Well done, I have never done one so much better than me and fair play for being brave enough to ask for feedback :)
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  • Wankleburr
    Wankleburr Posts: 19
    cheers for feedback i have got a chesty mount. but i think im going to start experimenting off the bike as well . but thanks the feedback any is always better than nothing :)
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  • welshkev
    welshkev Posts: 9,690
    there's too many sharp cuts in it.

    the cuts need to be at more appropriate times going into a similar shot or where there's a natural break to change to something new. the shot of the forks is actually good, but there's too much of it imo.

    and +1 for the music :lol:
  • fredblob
    fredblob Posts: 196
    seen better

    your camera angle wasn't very good and the music was dodgy

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