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hambones
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It's amazing what you can find on the net!
I'm not sure the author of this literotic piece is a true cyclist!!
'The Bar
by MrDeviant©
It was a gorgeous day; the sky was a lovely baby blue covered with white, fluffy cumulus clouds. What awaited me around the next bend was much, much darker indeed.
I had been cycling for hours, riding my way across the country on bicycle, and decided that I needed to get a drink and refill my water bottles for the next leg of my trip.
I must have looked really out of place in that bar. I mean, here I was, a sheen of perspiration making my body glisten, wearing skintight top and shorts that were all but see-through as wet as they were with my sweat, slightly out of breath after riding the last 250 miles.
The bar, a backwoods one at that, in the middle of nowhere, was filled with patrons to overflowing. It did not hit me at first, but eventually, I realized that there were no female patrons at all in evidence.'
Admittedly what followed this scene-setting was a tad unrealistic (I've spared you the details), but no more so than that which preceded it
I'm not sure the author of this literotic piece is a true cyclist!!
'The Bar
by MrDeviant©
It was a gorgeous day; the sky was a lovely baby blue covered with white, fluffy cumulus clouds. What awaited me around the next bend was much, much darker indeed.
I had been cycling for hours, riding my way across the country on bicycle, and decided that I needed to get a drink and refill my water bottles for the next leg of my trip.
I must have looked really out of place in that bar. I mean, here I was, a sheen of perspiration making my body glisten, wearing skintight top and shorts that were all but see-through as wet as they were with my sweat, slightly out of breath after riding the last 250 miles.
The bar, a backwoods one at that, in the middle of nowhere, was filled with patrons to overflowing. It did not hit me at first, but eventually, I realized that there were no female patrons at all in evidence.'
Admittedly what followed this scene-setting was a tad unrealistic (I've spared you the details), but no more so than that which preceded it
Still breathing.....
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...straight forward gay erotica...each to his own...are you gay hambones?...all the way...'til the wheels fall off and burn...0
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:roll: The author was writing as a woman!!! lolStill breathing.....0
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if he wasn't walking slightly bow-legged and wobbly after his 250 mile jaunt, he certainly was after0
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It's Audax porn silly! The bar full of horny rednecks is obviously a control station. Get your brevet card stamped in more ways than one.hambones wrote:slightly out of breath after riding the last 250 miles.
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If I'd just done 250 miles I want a seriously large steak and kidney pie and chips, never mind water0
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...oh, I see I assumed it was a bloke telling the story...give us the link so that we know what happened next...what did she get for lunch?...all the way...'til the wheels fall off and burn...0
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Something roasted I suspectChrisLS wrote:...what did she get for lunch?0 -
hambones - how did you find this story anyway? What were you searching for?0
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What's wrong with this story?? Warning: mild filth content!
What's wrong with this story?
You didn't finish it
Warning: mild filth content
What part of that did you find mildy filthy? Was it - "a sheen of perspiration making my body glisten, wearing skintight top and shorts that were all but see-through as wet as they were with my sweat". :oops:hambones - how did you find this story anyway? What were you searching for?
A Mills and Boon story about cycling?0 -
Sadly when you discover cycling at quite an old age (relatively speaking here), and it then becomes a fixation, all of your friends send you endless links, articles, etc on cycling (as if to prove the point that you have become a cycling bore!). This story was sent to me and I just found the throwaway line about 250 miles hilarious and felt a need to share Still breathing.....0
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Hi i think you must have been talking about Floyd Landis,did he then cycle another 250 miles and go to the next bar, and swears that he never takes drugs,yeh right.ademort
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Bronzie wrote:
It's Audax porn silly! The bar full of horny rednecks is obviously a control station. Get your brevet card stamped in more ways than one.hambones wrote:slightly out of breath after riding the last 250 miles.
No, if it was it would be set in a scout hut or a bus shelter, nothing so metro as a bar.0
